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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 23 March 2018

I am poem

I am poem is a little simple but its very fun to do its like you write your memory's but write your imagination.

Tuesday, 6 March 2018

Endless Worlds

Endless Worlds
Here a boy named Def other kids called him dumb ass nub it was not funny for him it was cruel to him it made him sad so his dad took him out of school but after that they fell into a world seeing his dad dead he did not know what to do but one thing to do…

Chapter one
The Monster

He looked all over the place to find things but at the over world a news went through the city they were scared to go to the depths of the abyss, in the hole a boy was there when he was stupid something made him so smart that he made 2 a sensor and a robot miner but it was small he took his stuff and jumped to the second floor of the abyss, he heard screaming there he saw a girl about to get eaten he got on the ground and throw a rock to it he made in 30 mins a giant robot to fight, it took 30 mins to get to him so he thought to beat it and he saw the girl wiggling to the water he saw tentacles on her but he battled to the death with that monster.

Chapter two
The Base

He saw more and more monsters appeared he ran with his robot and grabbed the the girl and jumped into the water and he noticed gills on the girl, he knew there was a dock there he was happy then he rushed there and got in the dock he noticed this was a base he has scrap but he did not make a gun or a knife because there was laser rifles right next to him he went to the door and that girl appeared next to the closed robot he opened the door and found his friends sleeping he woke them up and there names are Cameron, Rose, Pollyanna and John they were happy to see him, he was happy to and they saw the girl that he saved and said hi at different times they said their names, she was not scared but she asked for help he wondered why did she need help she said “I need help to get my brother back so he agreed to help, they went to the surface and started killing monsters but the girl had no weapons so they started bringing the monsters meat.
Chapter three
Going Home



the girl found here brother sleeping in jail they heard a portal opening the girl said thank you when they left.

Tuesday, 13 February 2018

All About me

Magandang umaga or magandang hapon.

My name is John I'm a Yr 7 at HHS my teachers name is Wheae Reawen.

I like in school is maths and writing.
I like in home is kogama, yt milk and fish.

I like a game called kogama because it is a fun online game .

I make maths easy to get use to it.

I sit on a chair next to a table in silence.

Sorry I have nothing else to talk about.

Friday, 15 December 2017

Snowman Discover (Tell Story)

BLURB:Today we have been learning about roll a story, I rolled a dice and it lands on a number, you can roll the dice 4 times and you have to stay in that story and work with it.
Snowman Discover
"Here my boy, i'm going to tell you a story about me and my friends finding something…"

Snowman Discover (Tell Story)
At the middle of the blazing night I was moving around and I live in the north pole and started and my friends we noticed something blue then it change color into orange and change color a color I've never seen it looked like blue and orange mixed up then we quickly dug it out with our short logs which is our hands and arms then... It was a snow gem the legendary gem no one has seen so we kept it in a treasure chest which is made from steel it needs a key and a code. We knew how to carry it needs snow and being careful.

"And that’s the end of the story when i was only 100 years old but now i must leave," *COugh, Cough.*

Friday, 24 November 2017

Alarm Call

Blurb:In literacy we looked at a picture called Alarm call and we had to make a story about it it do not need to be 1 story it can be alot or not alot of story's.
and i made 2 storys

Unknown vs sleeping kitten
There was an unknown monster the monster is scary and it looked too real then...



IT TRIED TO CATCH ME!? And it looked like it's going to eat me 15mins later it kept on trying to catch me, I was scared the wind went to me and scared me more i kept on thinking to keep on running and ditch this thing… “A DOOR” I said i ran to the door a knife appeared out of nowhere i grabbed it and bust the door open then I left the  knife on the floor then… IT ApPeArEd and caught me then I close my eyes and it ate me.

And then it was just a dream i tough, I was happy out of that scary nightmare.






Unknown VS Secret Warrior Kitten

A troll went to my house a not scary troll ive battle something ,wwwaaayyy’ stronger but that troll did not know i'm a warrior kitten and warriors never sleep and I…

Attacked a simple attack and i know simple attack are the trolls weakness but i do have a robot mech thingy which i forgot what its called it was total awkward i just call it body armour. I threw my ball’s at him which are my toys i was bored because theres only 3 but thou i screwed up because i did not charge it, But i have 200 ball’s left but… I have another body armor and it's called K.W.S and it stands for (Kitten, Warrior, Suit)

I knocked him out and it's like a K.O and fell asleep, dragged him like it's murder

Tuesday, 7 November 2017

Fireworks poem

WALT:  On Tuesday poniu-o-toka we did a fireworks poem we did what Fireworks means to us.



Fantastic
Instinct
Realistic
Electric
Wonderful
Original
Raising
Kickoff

Sparkle

Tuesday, 26 September 2017

SHS Learning Journey 5

Day 5 of my journey me and my group went to the Lewis Pass Scenic Reserve, I found a tree that looked very interesting, but then i got lost of my track when i was taking a photo. It was hard looking for them i'm 5 time's faster than a few of my friends, I looked for some foot steps of my group i just walk staring at the foot steps, Then there was 2 tracks 10 separated in to 2 groups i ran to the right but they were at the left that's when I heard foot steps at the left. Quickly ran back & I chose left but I hate stairs going up I went up their was a rock slide even its not a slide I slide down it and jumped up and landed. I finally caught up with them but I was tiered... I walked up to them. I fell asleep for 8 minutes my group was gone again i ran to the van and it was not their i saw the van leaving so ran to the group van i was so annoyed one of my said John is hanging on the van¨ *laughs*but it was not funny. after all I was holding a huge stick and i slammed it to the van window so they know I was right there the other van saw me and they were the girls van my group van went to the side. i was finally in my group van.

Friday, 22 September 2017

SHS Learning Journey 4

The Farewell Spit has many beached whales when i went there in the first time, It was sad for the whale dying many people helped the whales then i helped the people who was saving when i was helping luckily brought 5 buckets, I filed it up, then I slowly tipped the bucket, the water ran down to the whale and pushed slowly when each bucket of water was tipped on the whale but there were 8 whales died the whale I pushed was alive when i thought the whale died and i accidentally farted on a died whale.
Image result for beached whales farewell spit
Farewell Spit fishing should be banned because it kills Hector dolphins. how? It harms the Hector dolphins and suffocate the Hector dolphins. Hector dolphins are spacial to the human that likes dolphins. The Hector dolphins are nearly extincted.












The whale from the farewell beach is sperm whales.

Wednesday, 20 September 2017

SHS learning Journey 3

WALT:In literacy we were doing learning journey for a week and its term 3.

Tuesday, 5 September 2017

Complex Sentences

How to create  a Complex Sentence.
1. capital letters and full stop
 2.2 verbs - A verb in each simple sentences.
3. Join 2 simple sentences.




In term 3 we were learning about complex sentences 

Friday, 11 August 2017

Bliss Balls

this poem shows a food writing if your interested to read you can read it.





Bliss Balls
I've heard a blender start when we're making bliss balls and it was fun making bliss balls when we were making the bliss balls it looks like a mud and felt like mud and i watched Josh ate it and it was funny when we we’re done we rolled it at the cocoa powder and nearly all the people ate the bliss balls only 2 didn't eat the bliss balls. We did eat it for fun, the 7 ate one that they made and they said “it's yum” so i tried one and it's Delius.













|Bonus writing:

The bliss balls are amazing and it was fun with little fort to make 10 bliss balls it is fun than playing! Bakings is fun with friends or family and it is fun with both.

Wednesday, 5 July 2017

weather art

This term we have been learning about weather. In art I created a stormy night picture.

First I made a silhouette with black paper and used white crayon and made broken buildings.

Next used dye to make the background the color was light blue to dark blue.

Then I dabbed and jabbed with black paint on the top and placed it slowly on the art.

and know I made the lightning with white paint used a small paint brush and make it as trees.

Friday, 16 June 2017

antarctic description

Over the last few weeks, during literacy we have been learning about Antarctica wee visited Antarctic Center and read lots of information about Antarctica. I wrote a description about  Antarctica and a story about a Day in the life in Antarctica.                              


Friday, 5 May 2017

Hide and seek

We have been learning about a fun game called hide and seek. We have to make a map where we hide and tell them where!
North to the door go out of the building and go to east way and other north near a playground it's the best spot.

life cycle

we have been learning about life cycle and how they grow this is the life cycle that i made  we have been making life cycles my one is an adult ant male they should do the egg,larva form, cocoon form and the adult form we have been messing around to the writing and reading at the same time.

Tuesday, 20 September 2016

Compound sentences


today in writing we were learning how to write compound sentences.
A compound sentences is 2 sentences joined together with "and".

Friday, 8 July 2016

white chocolate

we tasted the chocolate and we wrote about it

Milk Chocolate

we tasted the chocolate and we wrote about it

Tuesday, 10 May 2016

my many colored days


mrs mcguinniety read us dr. Seuss  story. my many Colored and feeling poem.

Friday, 15 April 2016

Anzac Ted


We watched the story about Anzac ted. we had to describe what Anzac Ted looks like. We had to use adjectives